Aet Lindling

Offensive and stupid. Even for rap, this had no point, the rhymes were forced, and it was generally bad. You need to post 2 reviews now, which you should've done ...

This would be better as a short story or a longer and more descriptive poem. As it is, it leaves too many questions unanswered. Sometimes stories are better with questions ...

On a small note, swearing is allowed in writing (just not posts in non-writing topics), so unless you censored this because of personal beliefs or something it'd be perfectly fine ...

You need to write 2 reviews because of the 2:1 review:work rule. (Does anyone read the Rules before posting anymore?) This was okay in the beginning and middle, but the ...

An octillion and twenty-eight percent, even. You almost made me wake up my dad in convulsions of laughter, meanie. "Nice April Fool's prank. You're fired." *convulses again* No like seriously. ...

Black Ghost pretty much summed it up. This is basically a rant, and a tangential one at that. I'm drinking cause today was a sort of day where everything went ...

First off, read the articles LIF suggested. They should help. Basically, this isn't good. There are so, so many other poems almost exactly like this, and the term for all ...

First off, it isn't spelled Reapper. A misspelled title is really bad, as the title is the reader's first impression of the story, and you want them to come in ...

I love this piece, I had to read it a few times to get everything, and even still I think there are more layers waiting for me. I think Black ...

“I won’t.” He says. Don't capitalize "he". “Oh, Kavi.” She says, her voice thick. Don't capitalize "she". :P Apart from that, this was very good. The emotional tension hung well, ...

I love them all. I cired in the 4th book, when BUTLER DIES. and when HOLLY DIED in the 4th book. And in the new one ARTY MURDERS HIMSELF adn ...

"Trust me I know what I am talking about!" No, you don't. :P This is very good, expressive writing, and you're just dismissing it because it's a bit too "scary" ...

Rick, please refrain from trying to find ways to put me at fault. True, I was getting a tad sarcastic there, but there's a few key points there: 1. I ...

A young handsome farm boy named Luke who doesn't know who is parents are lives with his uncle and while talking to a strange man of the village named Obi-Wan ...

I vote this thread for '08 and have never had or smelled chicken pastrami, and am thus intrigued by the notion of chicken pastrami scented soap! Aet Lindling. And I ...